@Emperor (First of, why don’t you talk on Discord? Like your online and you say something you just disappear and come back ten minutes later asking what the question was. It’s fine if you have a reason. So I asked you why and you only replied sorry. Like, why don’t you tell us. Because otherwise it seems really rude.
Now, tips
As I told you,
1. titles. You have them but they’re not very clear. Use “**” on both sides of the title or a hashtag in front of it (with space)
2. Tech, this is very important since it can justify your huge ship numbers and can show if your BSing)
3. Write about how life is, laws...
(Complaints and solutions (I don’t blame you entirely. Your unaware. Read some RP instead of just guessing)
1. Your ship count is BSingly high. Solution: lower the ship size, lower the amount of ships or have meme low tech.
2. Earth lol. A lot of faction originate from earth, like GBE, but note that there’s one earth and everyone can’t own it at the same time. And it’s in Another fudging galaxy. solution: don’t have earth
3. You don’t just turn up and make an alliance without knowing or agreeing with the faction, also you have to be more specific in your RP. You alliance with R.R.s most describing sentence was “now we are allies”. Solution: be more specific
If you have any questions ask us. Someone’s always friendly on the discord server