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ONI changed the title to United Earth Government (IN PROGRESS).
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    This comment here is to add stuff just in case the original post gets too long

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    So this is the UNSC thing

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      YAreyaREdAzE basically yes. Still in progress though

        ONI
        As an RP'er I'm generally against faction that base themselves off too heavily from existing IPs. So I recommend adding your own twists and turns to it to make it more unique. In the end, how enjoyable to interact with your faction comes down to how you portray it in Roleplay, so I look foward to seeing how it performs.

        Fort_Master_Gustav I am going to add more of my own concepts, but I am keeping some of the already existing assets for the faction.

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          ONI
          (are you in the cosmo-rp discord group? Since it would be easier and faster to introduce you to the norms of rp.)

          (Also, not critizizing though "several hundred planets" is a bit too big for a newer rp'er like you, a common number of systems is around 1-30, and i dont see several hundred planets as a managable or even likely number in that.)
          (also, the reason for me suggesting to start off really low to probably what you want is that rp here is kinda a fun group thing, no-one is supposed to be "the best" and powerfantasy has no place here, so start low, expand as you go and get more knowledge and expirience, and please remember that change needs to happen from time to time, if your faction is wayyyyy to over-powered at your level it will come with bad rep and if you're willing to change, good. If not, well, no-one's gonna rp with you :/)

          (shortly said, be willing to change and expect to start off weak since its then easier to manage and learn without coming with out-of-character consequences and in-characer consequences.) 🙂

          Yigabomb Yeah, I changed it way down to five planets. Much easier to manage now

            ONI listen to this dude. He knows what he’s saying

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            KrankysFirebrand48 I am.

              ONI changed the title to United Earth Government .

                ONI Hwnlo

                Just waitin till faction is ready for alliances

                  REvenger Sounds good. Can be useful for trade and research.

                    ONI are you done? Because my faction is one mkre step to being complete(ships and final touches)

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                      REvenger I can change out some of the stuff and make it more my own

                      so I am almost finished

                        HO another earth

                        a month later

                        ONI
                        A single corvette appears on the edge of UNSC territory, approaching slowly.

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                          3 escorts meet the corvette and hail it to follow them to a station for docking

                          ONI
                          The corvette lazily approaches and follows the codking instructions. Once the process is over, they await inspection.

                            Romando07 The stations docking master awaits at the corvettes docking ramp and asks the ships captain in an authoritative tone " permission to come aboard for inspection?"

                            ONI
                            There are a few moments of silence before the answer comes :

                            "You have been granted permission to board and inspect. Doors are opened."

                            With that, a nearby door from what looked like perfectly blended side of the corvette opens, and a ramp extends towards the inspector.

                              Romando07 The inspector trailed by 2 UNSC marines (unarmed) carrying scanners, while the docking master pulls out a pen clicks the top and begins walking around the ship, taking notes on his clipboard while the 2 marines scan for hidden compartments and such.

                              The Docking Master turns to the ships captain, and asks him to state thier name for the record.

                              ONI
                              "My name is captain Tarik." he says in official voice. He appears to be a man in white-gold uniform with a little star badge on his chest.

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                              Romando07 25 minutes later, the corvette is finished inspection. The docking master thanks Captain Tarik for his cooperation and asks if they need supplies and fuel.

                              ONI
                              "We are in no need of supplies or fuel thank you. I was sent on a diplomatic mission to establish contact and potential treaties. May I speak with someone who has the authority?"

                                Romando07 "Right this way Captain, we have a dropship ready to take you to the surface"

                                They follow the Docking Master to a small dropship hangar to find a freshly painted and scrubbed pelican waiting for them. The 70mm swivel nose gun has been removed and the dropships wings missile mounts are empty.

                                ONI
                                Tarik enters the dropship without questions and waits.

                                  Romando07 "Welcome aboard Cpatain", the pilot exclaims "Im Warrent Officer Ryan Mckay and ill be taking you to the surface" the pilot turns around in his seat and starts flipping control switches and buttons. The captsin notices on the back of his flight helmet a sticker that reads stop screaming im scared too. With a sudden hiss the dropships rear door closes and the pilot awaits for the all clear to depart.

                                  "Docking station to Greenflight, permision to depart"

                                  The pilot responds " acknowledged, departing now"

                                  "Captain sir this could be a wild ride so hold on to your potatoes"

                                  The dropship speeds out of the hanger, initiates a slight roll towards the planet, passing freighters and warships alike.

                                  ONI
                                  The captain says nothing and doesnt look too disturbed by the flight, but he is however holding tight to his seat while observing the ship.

                                    Romando07

                                    25 minutes later, they land in front of what appears to be a government building from the view of the dropships main windscreen.

                                    The pilot, unseals the hatch with another hiss, and as the ramp falls he spys 4 honour guards awaiting to take him to the government office.

                                    Once the captain decends from the craft the hatch is resealed and the dropship ready to take off.

                                    ONI
                                    The captain looks around to see what this planet is like and follows the honourary escort.

                                      Romando07 they arrive just a few feet from the main doors where they are greeted by the Prime Minister. "Welcome captain, hopefully the flight down wasn't too rough. We will be meeting in my private study to discuss whats needed"

                                      ONI
                                      "Greetings."
                                      The captain replies in his formal tone and nods.

                                        Romando07 they reach the study and the Captain finds a fire going and fresh coffee and desserts on a tray with the PMs desk covered in papers with doodles which seem to be done by children along with photos of beaming kids and himself along with a somewhat eldery woman.

                                        The captain intrigued by this asks "what's all this about"

                                        The PM replies with "ah, drawings made by my grandchildren, such talented artists"
                                        He then walks over and picks up the photo of him and the woman, "this here is my wife, i wouldnt trade her for anything. We complete eachother"

                                        "Now lets get to business, what are you here to discuss"

                                        ONI
                                        "I am here to discuss potential treaties between us. My name is Tarik and I speak in the name of IMG. I believe I have something, a proposal, that can benefit us both. Would you like to hear more?"

                                          Romando07 " Yes I would, so lets discuss this then, sit down and relax"

                                          "We have anything you might need, from ores, exotic food, fine goods, art, carpentry, building materials, anything in the entertainment industries, medical equipment and even armors, be it for ships or personal armors. But perhaps most importantly, we have more than enough to pay for anything we might wish, and as such I believe its in our interests to seek closer relations as we build trust that will proppel our people forwards. Some of the things we want include availability to your markets, under your regulations if needed, allowance of passage, unrestricted movement in public spaces, acknowledgment of our treaty, rights to participate in any and all activities that non-citizens are allowed, right to fair trial or equivalent there of in your law and outlawing discrimination. In return you will get acces to all goods we think suit you the best, you can certainly expect a boom in economy while doing buesiness with us and you may ask for add-ons or special, seperate treaties that are good for both of us. I assure you that we have our customers well-being always in mind and that we condemn fraud and other crimes. We dont ask for any exceptions from your law, as everyone has to follow rules in their territory, so we will follow in yours.
                                          I think that sounds more than fair. Do you agree?"

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                                          Romando07 the PM thinks," I agree to that exepct one on condition, you cannot have rights to non civilian activities because of classified government and military secrets and assets."

                                          ONI
                                          "That sounds fair. Its a deal then?"

                                            Romando07 "The deal is on"
                                            The two shake hands and a treaty paper is signed.
                                            " Now Captain Tarik, would you like a tour of the city of Ottawa?"

                                            ONI
                                            "I wold love that, but let me just tell my crew..."
                                            He does something to his watch and a tiny beep is heard.
                                            "There, first merchant ships should arrive in few hours... Now, show me your beautiful city please."

                                              Romando07
                                              They leave the area and decend the stairs to the back of the building, passing government officals and some small groups reporters interviewing cabinet ministers.
                                              Finally they reach the grounds where they find a sleek black helicopter gettig ready to take off, they are greeted by a man and a woman who escort them to chopper, usher them inside and take off.

                                              Once in the air the PM begins saying the city itself is the old Canadian Capital and was built on what was old Ottowa, shows old landmarks and some of the city scape.

                                              They begin flying past huge towers in the downtown area and reach the city outskirts
                                              The pm says to the captain "as you can see we begin to get into farmland, this is one of millions of farming space on Earth itself, each growing a variety of crops."

                                              "This is a very impressive operation you have" the captain exclaims.
                                              "Why thank you, Tarik"

                                              As they fly into the city center, a nearby explosion skakes the craft

                                              The pair look out the windows to see part of the downtown area in smoke and sounds of gun fire echoing.

                                              ONI
                                              @Romando07
                                              They come to an open area plaza and prepare to land, the helicopters pilot yells to them over the radio "sirs this is the only safe area to land, your going to have to hoof it to the safe house". That very instance small arms fire begins bouncing off the choppers reinforced hull. The PM dares to peek out of the window and sees several figures firing dated weapons at the craft.

                                              Seconds later the helicopter lands bringing the opening doors positioned away from the oncoming fire, as soon as the doors open Tarik and the PM are grabbed by the two bodyguards who accompanied them and forced to run to a frendly held position by UNSC marines. As they come close the marines lay down covering fire, and a young private begins shouting "Over here Over he-". The group got to him to discover his missing as a fellow marines drag.him to saftey and protect the group.

                                              ONI
                                              @Romando07
                                              The marines get pushed back to the enterance of a nearby shopping mall as terrorist fire comes from all front sides to them. The doors manage to finally open and the bodyguards, Tarik and the PM run towards an empty shop passing weapons cases and barricades along with wounded marines. Tarik finally manages to let out a deep breath, to which the PM says " everything will be just fine, so much for a peaceful first meeting" and forces a smile trying to shed light on a good situation.

                                              Minutes or hours, what seems like days go by as they wait for more help to arrive. The group sits in silence till loud bangs are heard on the mall doors, until they begin to warp and soon blow inward as the result of an RPG round.

                                              The marines take tactical positions, but are dazed and confused because of the smoke and ringing in their ears so they are quickly killed off by the attackers. The PMS bodyguards pull M6D silenced pistols from the inside of they're suit jackets and open fire at the gaping door hole.

                                              ONI
                                              Tarik looks at the PM and tells:
                                              "Sir, do you know this building? Do you know a way out? I can help get us out of there, but you need to tell your men to not be in the area! I hope you arent against, but I came preppared for a fight."

                                                Romando07 the bodyguards cover the pm and Tarik and return fire, until one of them is down and the other moves them further into the mall. As they leave the area, a scream is heard, and terrorist holding the head of the downed bodyguard is seen. The PM white as a ghost turns back around as the group encounter more enemies. They are boxed in. The remaining bodyguard trys to return fire but is killed and riddled with bloody holes.

                                                The terrorists surround the two and tie thier hands with zipties and kneel them on rhe ground. The PM with hatred on his lips says " actions like these will never be tolerated at all by my admiration" a terrorist beside him smiles and hits him with the butt of his rifle knocking him unconscious. Tarik, with a calm but not on the inside look prays that some miracle will happen.

                                                ONI
                                                Tarik smiles, looking terrorist straight in the eyes, before pressing something on his watch with his tied hands. a quick zipppp is heard and the zipties fall off his hands, burnt in half. Tarik then presses something on his watch again this time realeasing a high pitches sizzling noise that is designed to knock people unconscious in short range, but it doesnt seem to affect Tarik.

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                                                  Romando07 (oof i had a plan to get them out)

                                                    Romando07 (eh feck it im gonna do it anyway)

                                                    Minutes before Tariks somewhat escape 3 UNSC Frigates await above the city deploying marines and dropships alike to combat hostile forces. One frigate upon observation, deploys 4 drop pods from its underbelly which land on the roof of the mall.

                                                    Just as Tarik knocked out the enemies around him, the skylight near where he is shatters as 4 heavily armoured figures, men and women drop from ropes and are equiped with silenced weapons drop beside Tarik, and drop the disarmed terrorists, and while Tarik stood there, the armour clad figures sprinted down the hall towards another group of hostiles. The lead soldier out of the four leaped into the middle of them, putting 2 rounds from a pistol into the first, grabbing the rifle of the second enemy jerking it out hard and down the bones burst out of his arm at the elbow and then 2 rounds to the chest.

                                                    The rest of the three tank like soldiers obliverated the rest, sparing no one with efficacy and a somewhat elegant grace.

                                                    They return to Tarik and the lead soldier in a baritone voice says "status report"

                                                    ONI A KSI Ship exits FTL out of nowhere. you cant track it's from point

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                                                    Daiaurufu-Garu The Orbital Weapons Platforms, target and open fire

                                                    These OMAC guns launch a 3,000 ton tungsten/depleted uranium projectile at 12,000 Km per second.

                                                      ONI The KSI Ship with 25 crew has been obliderated. another civil ship enters the region. our connections between the KSI is getting depleted

                                                        Daiaurufu-Garu They fire again, leaving nothing and reload

                                                          Daiaurufu-Garu Nothing happens because the generators are ground based. the Defense Fleet wipes out the destroyers with volleys of MAC fire.

                                                          (also there are hundreds of these surrounding my homeworld)

                                                            Daiaurufu-Garu No I'm not allowing that because you have no way of getting them on my planets. This is the first time you've ever come into my territory like this. The only time you've come into my territory was with a completely different planet.

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                                                              Daiaurufu-Garu What?? That is not even a good answer
                                                              so you edited your thing, I see

                                                                Daiaurufu-Garu You keep saying we were allies even though we aren't

                                                                The OMACs open fire. The combined mass of tungsten and depleted uranium slugs tear through the station like butter

                                                                  Daiaurufu-Garu No.

                                                                    Daiaurufu-Garu magic space unicorns come out of my asshole and use the power of literal fucking bullshit to destroy the BILLION SHIPS YOU HAVE