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Northerner
Most mistakes are typing errors or common mistakes, I've marked them and made a correction.
Before you proceed just one thing: I'm not a native English speaker so I have probably missed some mistakes.

Bold means mistakes, [brackets] are things I've added.

GalaxyinFlamesTip = "Contains a large number of ship made by me and the community! Press the 'triangle' to access the drop down to get into other ship folders"

ships

sts_factoryDesc = "This cheap and efficent factory produces the same shells as the ammo factory but, creates these shells out of slag ingots instead of thin air.

efficient

nrm_factoryDesc = This Factory produces missiles that envelope a target in repairing nanites fixing hull damage in a wide area. These missiles are difficult to produce and require sourcing multipule resources.

multiple

nrm_storageDesc = "This storage conatiner house extra missiles produced at a NRM Factory. These missile are expensive to produce so protect this storage units well."

container & these

short_band_radioDesc = "This compact, short range radio allows communication with other near-by UCFN vessels and stations. You will need this in order to trade with stations."

nearby

restitutorDesc = "This specialized foundery can squeese the last bits of iron out of slag piles and turn them into iron ingots. While this process is labor intensive it also means your near worthless stockpiles of slag can be made worth something! \n\n 3 Slag Ingots = 1 Iron Ingot"

foundry & squeeze

LIPDesc = "The Mihr Ion Projectors are simillar to the Human Ion Emitters the exceptions being the Mihr Projectors are on turrets to better track targets, but this comes at the cost of damage. This Light version was designed for use on fighters and corvettes."

Similar

ElectroMissileLauncherDesc = "The missiles used by the Mihr are filled with electro charged particles that dispersed in a wide radius upon impact to disrupt as many enemy electronic systems as possible. This missile also does a massive amount of damage to shields if they score a direct hit."

This sentence needs rewriting.

StorageDesc = "This basic storage system keeps extra missile produced at factories until they are ready to be used at a launcher. Does little damage to the rest of the ship when destroyed."

missiles

CobaltBlasterDesc = "The Karikai blaster has expanded plasma chambers to fire a much more powerful plasma ball at longer ranges but this is at the expence of fire rate."

expense

ACLDesc = "This is the primary cannon used on any repectable Bokoro combat ship, firing a salvo of these cannons at point blank range will end most enemies."

respectable

CACMDesc = "This Marian cannon works much like the Human gattling gun in that the barrles rotate to feed ammo into the gun and it has an extremely fast fire rate, however it must stop firing to be reloaded."

gatling

CACHDesc = "This massive turrent mount houses two Marian rotary cannons that can be set to stagger fire or be syncronised to fire at the same time."

turret & synchronised

CASDesc = "This advanced ammo storage used by [the] Marian are some how able to contain the explosion of the rounds inside doing very little damage to the rest of the ship."

(add) the & somehow

SHLAMSDesc = "This weapon is designed to fire a orb of that projects a 'hard light' barrier that destroys missiles [.] however other munitions can still pass through it."

an & an & (add) . & (Caused by previous change, add capital letter) However

SMLBDesc = "This heavier version of the Azur particle blaster sacrifices some fire rate and shot velocity for more out right damage. These are effective against small un-shielded targets and is a great weapon for Fighters and Corvettes."

Outright

SLACDesc = "This insanely powerful weapon uses solarite cells to generate massive fusion reactions that grows larger and more unstable the longer it travels. A target that is hit at by the begining of its travel will suffer little damage however, targets that are hit by shots that make it to the end of their travel are utterly annihilated. The expolsion from the shots at the end of their travel is so massive that a shield cannont protect from all of it. These weapons are tyically mounted on Capitol ships and Destroyers."

grow & they & typically

VeryHard = "Keep 'em comin'"
VeryHardTip = "(Very Hard) Enemies are tough as nails and will out gun you. You'll need all your skill, and wit to win here:\n\n"\

Outgun

Mining = "Mining equipment and ore storages"

Electro = "Mihr weapons and equipment:\n\n ● The Mihr are a robotic race that are now friendly to humans and consider them one of their closest allies however, this was not always the case. The first race to be encountered by humans, a contact that resulted in a 3 year war on Mars that went poorly for both races until the Karikai interviened.\n\n ● While the Mihr are not the best fighters and only use EMP missiles and energy weapons. They are natural engineers and are best at combat support, because of this they rely on other races to provide the backbone of their combat forces.\n\n ● They are the driving force behind the UCF and the masterminds of its creations."

intervened

Cobalt = "Karikai weapons and equipment:\n\n ● The Karikai are an advanced Ave race that are both technologically advanced and have a strong dis-trust of humans. Which is well earned since the Humans started a 3 year first encounter war. After the Karikai defeated the human fleets around Mars and brough the humans into peace negotiations several fringe worlds seperated from fragmented Human Federation and begain a guerrilla war to destroy the UCF.\n\n ● The Karikai are masterful fighters but their frail bodies make them rely on technology and distance to win a fight. They make up the core fighting force of the UCF.\n\n ● They are the first race to join the UCF and though they strongly opposed the humans induction into the UCF the destruction caused by the rebellion swayed them."

distrust & brought & begin

Adamite = "Bokoro weapons and equipment:\n\n ● The Bokoro look, to humans, like many large rocks lumped together to form a huminoid shape. The Bokoro are not a race to be insulted by creatures so small and there have been many (somtimes large) skirmishes between Human and Bokoro.\n\n ● They are low tech compaired to other races but are very strong, resiliant, prideful and enjoy close combat. They use high power missiles and cannons that are extremely effective at point blank range. Through a arrangment with the Karikai they also have a small selection of energy weapons.\n\n ● Though not a true member of the UCF, many Bokoro join the UCF as mercenaries."

humanoid & compaired

Chlorophite = "Marian weapons and equipment:\n\n ● The Marian are a large humanoid species with exo-skeletons much like earths bugs. Thier appearance alone triggers most humans flight-or-fight responce, which is good since they are extremely hostile to humans.\n\n ● Unmatched in personal combat the Marian are exceptionally strong, fast, and intelligent. They use rapid fire cannons and advanced missiles, but they are actually afraid of energy weapons and do not use them. \n\n ● Though they are aiding the rebellion there are a few small colonies that are sick of the military state and have allied with the UCF."

response & their

I hope that's everything, I've probably missed some. Guess I'm really worthy of that title now .

Alpha I know you couldn't ha ha! And thank you for doing that!

Also rereading the descriptions reminded me of how bland they were so I spiced them up a bit too! This time I actually took care to proof read myself!

that doesn't mean anything though

I have gotten much better at ship building since my sweeping updates to the ships in Galaxy in Flames. People also seem to be getting a lot better at the game as well so that begs the question.

Sombreroman As a UCFN Captian you are to do whatever is necessary to form a fleet to defeat the rebels. So yes that would extend to hiring memebers from other races as mercs to aid the war effort. The other races crew modules and terrain tabs will be added far into the future.

If you find a friendly station they will help you in anyway they can (Repairs, Trading) however sometimes you will go to a friendly world and find out that the rebels captured the station and you will be forced to destroy it.

As far as turning coat that's not really something I can accomplish in a mod txt so I just try to prevent you from destroying friendly stations to kinda lock you into being the good guy. But apparently then can still be destroyed...

Sadly I can't do anything in mod txt to turn the bounty into a really enveloping story but I will try to turn it into an engaging story the best I can

2 Things:
1. Your GiF mod crashes for me, the lite version doesnt (No other mods enabled).
Link to Crashlog: https://textuploader.com/1598v

2.Long ago I submitted many ships of which ''ShortCircuit'' passed, but I dont see it in the mod. I wanted to change one small detail I overlooked 1 PD isnt getting power because of bad Control Room placement) and noticed that I couldnt find it in the library.

Meiko okay well let me give you two points

1 GiF : Lite doesn't have player submitted ships in it, only the main mod adds the player submitted ships. This is make loading faster, people who don't want to fight the META ships that players often submit for the main mod and to improve mod compatibility with other mods.

2 I made a post in the Galaxy in Flames page a few days ago that states the mod is not working yet, I'm hoping by the end of March I will have it working though and in that mod your ship as well as everyone else's submitted ships are present. But I will put a disclaimer in the mod intro that the mod is not working

Northerner
Ok, thank you.
I noticed that you said it wouldn't work some time ago, but I thought it would work now because I didn't see any disclaimer on the main post.
I was confused because there are other new ships in the GiF Library, but I couldn't find mine.
Sorry, now I know.
And I wish you good luck on fixing your mod, its great .