S20hudson06 Nice faction, but definitely not a type 4 civ, type 4 civs can control their supercluster of galaxies and even the entire home universe, they are also basically immortal. A starter faction should be at most type 2, which is what most if not all of the factions in the G-S16 galaxy are. But other than that minor detail, great start. Try expanding on your faction lore, including their economy, government type, recent history, and anything else you feel like including