Birby_the_Birb Expanding on what Zin said.
When creating a faction sheet you have too make different paragraphs with each containing a different aspect of your faction.
They're pacifist, and they worship technology.
That has nothing to do with a Government, it would fit more under culture.
so who can guess at their government structure?
Roleplaying isn't a game of guessing, it's a matter of telling a story. If you're a passifist faction you would most likely be a democracy. (pardon my english)
For tech, regular star wars tech is a really wide concept, you can keep it simple by saying that they use either laser, ammo or plasma technology, or all 3.
There is no such thing as a sapient AI, an AI is already an intelligent being.
The FTL part is a bit unbalanced, perhaps you could make it more across the line of that they managed to travel through a wormhole? And for regular solar system travel will regular FTL fuel do just fine.
When doing a species it needs to be balanced (same with everything else, but you've done that well enough), I would say as a good balance you should have a population around 750.000, since you only have 1500 ships.
I hope this helped, have fun RP'ing!
